Post by Overlord Starr on Mar 20, 2009 14:53:25 GMT -5
I wrote: Aki combed her short, black hair with her hand and sighed lightly. She looked at the clouds with her purple eyes, telling herself it was a beutiful morning in Vincent City. Soon, a boy who looked much like Aki came out.
"Sis, let's go." He murmured, his weapons latched on his back were clanging. Aki nodded and went to walk with him when she bumped- (Ran out of time)
Person 1 wrote: *erased bumped* asked him if he killed someone because she heard gun shots and someone screaming. He didnt say anything. Then she notsed that he had blood on his shoe and a lot of money in his pockets. All she could think is he was now a bank robber. Then the sound of siorons rang bud they began to run. Then- (writing style changed. Guessing he/she ran out of time)
Person 2 wrote: they went to the closed hotel and hide until the Police have left. "why did you have to go steal that money." "I didn't mean to we needed the money to go back to moms house." "your right, so much for the beautiful morning!!" "we can still make it a good morning. We Just ot to get on the fairy to the Vindo City and stay with mom."
-the end-
I kept spelling errors and such in there.
"Sis, let's go." He murmured, his weapons latched on his back were clanging. Aki nodded and went to walk with him when she bumped- (Ran out of time)
Person 1 wrote: *erased bumped* asked him if he killed someone because she heard gun shots and someone screaming. He didnt say anything. Then she notsed that he had blood on his shoe and a lot of money in his pockets. All she could think is he was now a bank robber. Then the sound of siorons rang bud they began to run. Then- (writing style changed. Guessing he/she ran out of time)
Person 2 wrote: they went to the closed hotel and hide until the Police have left. "why did you have to go steal that money." "I didn't mean to we needed the money to go back to moms house." "your right, so much for the beautiful morning!!" "we can still make it a good morning. We Just ot to get on the fairy to the Vindo City and stay with mom."
-the end-
I kept spelling errors and such in there.
