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Post by morgen on Nov 25, 2009 12:41:32 GMT -5
Lucien was throw to the floor which gave his demon an advantage to come out. Lucien could hear his own scream then suddenly, nothing hurt. He saw everything... in a manner. His demon was out but Lucien had control of the body. He watched as Zak walked off with Alice. He wasn't one-hundred percent sure what was going on but he had an idea. The brother met up, his demon tried to come out, and he stopped it before it could take over his soul and spirit. Lucien took a step toward Zak, feeling his heavy dragon body taking a step back because of Ryan and Ralph snapping at him. He shook his head and opened his mouth to speak but a roar came out instead. He took another step back and looked around. Sarah had left, most likely getting help. Lucien's eyes were still his dark reddish color but the brothers seemed to busy to notice that he was in control of the body. He grew angered from them not allowing him to go to Alice. He rose onto his back legs, rose his wings high, and roared loudly to show that he was more powerful. His demon had grown and so, as he stood, the tips of his wings reached the tops of the trees. He flapped his wings once and flew over them, the weight not slowing him down any. He quickly spotted Alice and ignoring the brother that followed. He quickly lowered and landed in front of the two. He took a step toward Alice but stopped and closed his eyes, shaking his head violently. Another dark breeze flew through the air. Roaring in anger and pain, it seemed as though he was calling out Alice's name followed by "help" and "run".
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 30, 2009 12:32:34 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Ralph and Ryan backed away as the demon rose to its two legs. It was much bigger than the last time they had met. Ryan was sure it had grown a few feet. He snapped at it again, trying to drive it away but it seemed to no longer be afraid of him. Its eyes were looking at where Zak and Alice had disappeared. Ryan's eyes grew wide with realization and he lunged to stop it but it was too late. The demon rose into the air and left them behind. Ralph made lost no time in following it and Ryan joined seconds after, howling a warning for Zak to hear.
And hear he did. Zak's ears pricked and he retained his human form taking Alice's hand and running. The demon was after Alice, just as he dreaded. They had to get somewhere where it couldn't find them or track them down. Too late, he spotted it up in the sky. And if he could see it, it sure as hell could see him. It landed in front of him and Alice, taking a step towards them. Zak would've went in front of Alice but she stepped forward towards the demon, her hand out. She took slow steady steps towards it, she wasn't afraid. She could see, it was Lucien. Her hand rested on the demon dog's head and she gently forced it down on its stomach. "Lucien, I'm hear. Don't worry." she told him and pet his head, her fingers tracing the crevasses of his ears. He was in pain and he needed her help. She sat down on the ground and pulled up beside him, resting his furry face in her lap and continuing to pet him. She could feel his heart beat slow to her petting and he seemed to calm down. Zak stood back, just watching, confused and yet amazed at the same time. Alice only wished she could stay like this for a little while longer.[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Dec 3, 2009 17:41:48 GMT -5
Lucien's demon stared at Zak but then he felt something grab his head. Suddenly, he lowered so he was laying on his belly and his head rested it Alice's lap. He stared up at Alice with calm eyes. He opened his mouth and grunted. "Al-ice..." he managed to growl through the fight with his demon. He looked over at Zak. "The winds..." Lucien snarled, his eyes seeming to change from normal to demon then back to demon. "Promise me that you'll fight against me" he said, staring, more like glaring, at Zak. It wasn't much a a question, it was a statement. Lucien was telling Zak to fight against him when he fought for the Netherworld. Lucien's bright eyes looked up at Alice. "And you... have a power you don't know how to control. You can control people's feelings as well as feeling it" Lucien explained, smiling slightly. His demon had calmed a bit, hearing Alice's tiny heart beat next to his ear. He wanted to stay there but knew what he learned and sat up. "I won't hurt either of you again" Lucien said, not only sounding more mature but acting, no, BEING more mature than last time. He really had learned manners. Lucien's ear like things twitched and his face turned toward a small opening in the trees. He rose to fours and walks off, his tail dragging behind him slowly. His ears and wings up, listening and warning whoever dared to fight. Lucien looked back at Alice barely, a way where everyone thought he was looking forward. He let a small purr escape his throat. "Call me... alone" was all that he mouthed to Alice with a final smile. Why did he want to return to Alice if he didn't want to hurt her? His demon felt more threatened by everyone else. Both Alice and his love Anne managed to calm the demon.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Dec 4, 2009 12:14:58 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice stared down into the demon's-no Lucien's eyes. He growled her name and she hugged him around his furry neck, wishing to ease his pain just a little. "I'm not going anywhere." she told him. His head turned to Zak, "Promise me that you'll fight against me." Zak understood automatically and inclined his head in a silent nod. He turned his attention back to Alice, speaking to her about her gift. Her power to calm people down, to control emotion and feel it. She had never herself thought of it as a power but more of a charm she had. But Lucien seem to think otherwise. "I won't hurt either of you again." Lucien got up to leave and Alice felt lonely. How she wanted him to stay with her. She stood too, watching him leave. Remembering the request he mouthed to her. He nodded, turning around and walking away. A minute later, Zak joined her.
It was the middle of the night now; she knew she shouldn't be up at this time. Especially calling boys: Jackal would not be happy. He was already moody, she didn't want to cause him anymore pain. Her cell phone was in her hand and she pressed the numbers to his phone, Lucien's phone, though she had no idea how she knew the number or if it was even accurate. She stared at her phone for a minute, wondering if this was the right thing to do. Then pressed send. The phone was up to her ear and she waited. One ring, two rings, someone picked up on the third ring. She was nervous but she answered, "Hello? Lucien?" She waited to hear if he would reply.[/glow] We shall continue on!!! I am so siked to know what happens next. It'd be cool if he told her that he wanted her to come with him or something like that.
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Post by morgen on Dec 7, 2009 22:44:13 GMT -5
Lucien ignored that phone that vibrated silently on the table next to him. He grabbed the phone and without looking at it, walked to the door, slipped on the jacket, then walked out the door. The night wind stung his cheeks but he ignored the pain and held the phone without answering. If he picked up and Alice started talking then someone was bound to hear her talking on the phone but if he was there then they could whisper to each other. He continued walking when the phone stopped moving. He just had to look so he glanced down at the phone and noticed at Alice was leaving a voice mail message. He smiled, a white breath lifting from his mouth as he guessed on what was happening. "Hello" would start the voice mail. "Hello? Lucien?" Alice would reply. "This is Lucien's cell phone... uh, I can't come to the phone right now so just leave a message at the beep thing" the voice mail message would say. He could just see Alice building up tears with him not answering which made him speed up. He didn't notice, until a few moments later, that he was hovering a few feet of the ground. His limbs being dragging behind him in the speed. He looked around and found a small, familiar looking house. He had watched Alice walk home for a few nights so he knew her house. He lowered very quietly and found a small balcony to land on. He landed very gracefully and walked up to the door. He placed his face up to the cold glass and placed his hands over his eyes to help him see in the darkness. He couldn't see much and so he mouthed out Alice's name. His warm breath leaving a misty mark on the glass. He suddenly fell to a soft ground when the door opened from in front of him. He tumbled and rolled onto his back, dropping the phone and spreading out his wings for a softer landing. He stopped and looked around the dark room to try and see who was there.
Words ~ 359 Muse ~ Normal Comment ~ Maybe it's Ryan or the father's room! Or you could do the original lovey dovey story and have it be Alice
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Dec 8, 2009 12:34:37 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] "This is Lucien's cell phone... uh, I can't come to the phone right now so just leave a message at the beep thing." Alice bit her lip to hold back the tears that threatened to fall. Maybe he didn't have his phone on him, that was probably it. She shook her head to get rid of the tears. She'd just try again. At this time, her eyes fell to the whistle on her desk. The moon's light reflected off its silver color, making it look beautiful. She stood, wearing her white night gown and walked to it, closing her hands around it and holding it up. Lucien had said that he would come when she used it. She decided to give it a try. She took a breath and gasped when she heard a noise. At first she thought it to be Jackal and rushed to make sure. She heard nothing by her door; the noise came from elsewhere. She looked seeing someone outside her balcony doors. Lucien perhaps? She walked up to the door, where the person's foggy breath had created mist on her door and opened it. Lucien tumbled inside and Alice's face lit up. "Lucien!" she half-whispered, half-squealed and hugged him in the awkward position he was on the ground, "Wow. I didn't expect you to come that quickly." She got up and beamed at him; her cheeks turning a light pinkish rosy color. "So, you wanted to talk to me?" she asked, looking at him.[/glow] Original Lovey Dovey It Is!!!^^
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Post by morgen on Dec 12, 2009 15:43:46 GMT -5
Lucien acted like nothing happened and sat on his feet so his knees were pointing out toward Alice. He shook his head slight hand put his right index finger in his right ear and twirled his finger. He seemed to wince. "I was already on my way when you blew that whistle than let out a high squealing noise." Lucien whispered, chuckling softly. She spoke after than and he sighed with a slight smile. "No, not really talk. I just wanted to see you again... er, that sounds kinda stalker-ish" Lucien commented, his smile faded as the thought about what he had just said. "Y'know... you're the only one I CAN talk to without being judged. Everyone blames me for my demon and I disagreeumption. Everyone assumes don't they? I assumed your brothers were trying to kill me as a job for the Heavens. After I found out what had really happened, my demon tried to change my mind and it was frustrating so I went off for a few years to train. When I figured I could be around you guy's again, I came out of hiding." Lucien explained, his voice soft but quickly rose for what he had to say next. "But everyone is scared of me! Everyone but you. Sarah thinks I'm a beast coming to destroy your world. Your father, who shouldn't be putting his nose into my business! And then your brothers who still don't trust me! I came, not only to see you, but to warn them that the war calmed down but has found another opening and has now being coming closer! So you see, EVERYONE has been assuming..." No comment was follow. No "except for you" or anything. He gave no room for Alice to talk within his whole speech. "So you see, no one cares to see me because their to scared or pissed at me! Or too busy..." his voice faded as he thought about Anne not seeming to care to see him because she was too busy looking for Griffins. He took a breath, allowing Alice to speak her mind if she had a comment. His shoulders and stiff look faded as he let his guard down.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Dec 14, 2009 12:51:59 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice watched and listened as Lucien talked. She wanted him to get it all out of his system; all the anger, all the grief and sorrow. She wanted him to let it all out, thinking that maybe he should've yelled too. When he finished he was silent and she let that silence pass for a minute. "You know, you're right about some things," she started looking at him, "But you're totally wrong about others." She lay her head on his shoulder, "Ryan, he doesn't believe your dangerous. Just the opposite. He believes you're really his friend. Zak, well, he's nervous around you but he's actually happy to have you around. You shouldn't worry about Ralph; Ralph doesn't really like anyone. Sometimes, not even me. "And my father, he can be real annoying sometimes but he's pretty wise." She looked up at him and smiled, "If anything else, no one here really hates you or is afraid of you. At least I know, Ryan and I aren't." Her eyes flickered down, "I hate to see you like this you know. It isn't fun to feel your sorrow; its so deep and it comes from so many things. It makes me feel sad that anyone in the world could feel this way." Her arms encircled him as far as she was able and hugged him tightly.[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Dec 19, 2009 20:44:33 GMT -5
Lucien stared at Alice and his chest tightened as he listened to Alice talk. The only thing that kept popping up in his mind was "what the Hell does she know?" but he continued to ignore his thoughts and listen to Alice's words that tried to calm him. It didn't help and his chest didn't relax but he managed to relax his mind so Alice wouldn't have to feel the pain that he wanted to dump on her. He crawled away from Alice before she could hug him so she couldn't touch him unless she moved closer. He didn't want her to read his face, know he was there just to vent and touch him to feel all of his pain. He had gone through so much to just be around Alice and her father had stopped them from talking and laughing and having fun. His mind had wandered and a few seconds later, he was back... well... not quite. Without thinking, he rose from his sitting position and walked to the door, he unlocked the small latch and walked into the hallway, he looked down at the carpet that followed both ways, to the right and left. He looked back and forth and his wings twitched slightly. He turned and a sound and looked at Alice. Nothing, he wasn't thinking. He walked down the hallway to the right, for to the left was the bathroom and stairs leading down. He opened each door quietly and whispered to himself. "Zak" was what he mumbled when he looked at the room across the hall of Alice's room. The room next to his was Ralph's and sure enough, Ryan was in the room between the father's room at the end of the hall and Alice's room. He spun in a circle between each door then ended up facing the father's door. "Oh, how I thirst for revenge" Lucien whispered slightly loud and his wings rose. Yes, he was controlling his demon and no, he wasn't planning to kill the father but he did plan to get back at the father for jumping to conclusions. He ignored Alice who stared at him, he looked at each door, all but Alice's and grinned. "They will all have their chance" he snickered slightly, not caring to let Alice know his feelings. Anger and pain built up. One that would make someone commit suicide. He was so angered and pissed that no one but Alice would care to wait and listen, to even stand up for him! The upsetting part of this was that his eyes kept wandering from the father's door to Ryan's. It was true he held a small grudge against all of them, except Alice, but more so those two. The father didn't even know Lucien and just judged on the stories and rumors he heard. And Ryan, just because he wasn't there for Lucien. Lucien thought for a moment and thought on. "It's true that I agreed to be his rival and friend..." he mumbled, a bunch of pain disappearing but the pain and anger was still there. His eyes wandered to the father's door. Lucien reached for the door knob and slowly opened it. Peeking in, he saw the father sleeping with his back to the door.
Words ~ 566 Muse ~ SWEET! Comment ~ *falls to floor* UMF! I had so much to do and I still do ><' maybe I can lie out of some of my issues... XD Sorry if my grammar or replies hasn't made much sense lately, I've been out of it! Heh, I'm addicted to Lucien! If you don't really understand, Lucien forgave Ryan for whatever he did XD but he still wants to harm the father *sighs and shakes head* poor Lucien, he forgot that Alice can feel his pain.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Jan 4, 2010 12:37:12 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Jackal wrinkled his nose and turned onto his stomach, sleepily. His arm wrested on the pillows and he was completely unaware of Lucien who had opened his door. Alice's eyes widened with realization of what was going to happen. She did the first thing she could think of; she tackled Lucien to the ground, pulling him away from the door. There was a snort from her father's room but he remained sleeping. She closed the door quietly and breathed relief. Then she tried to look Lucien in the eye with a stern face. That didn't work out well. "Lucien," she said, helping him back up, "You can't just go into people's rooms while their sleeping. That's rude." However she knew his true intentions; what he really wanted. Revenge, something she'd never figure out. Why did guys have to get revenge? Why was it so important to them? The door down the hall squeaked and she jumped and turned; Ryan looked sleepily out of his door. He saw Lucien and Alice and smiled, "I've got to be dreaming. Never in a million dreams would I have believed this." He stepped out and yawned, running his hair through his head, "So you're sneaking people into the house now eh?" Alice rolled her eyes, her attentions now on Ryan. Her hand was holding Lucien's however both because she wanted to and because she didn't want him causing any more trouble.[/glow] I think I've lost it today. The post just seems to be missing something but thats all I can muster up today. ^^ Enjoy!!!^^
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Post by morgen on Jan 14, 2010 18:10:50 GMT -5
It wasn't the tackle or ever Alice's weight that made Lucien fall and grow limp. No, the reason was, he was shocked. He was shocked that Alice, his friend had tackled him. He landed on his stomach with a thud then looked up at the father and watched him slip out of sight as Alice pulled Lucien out of the room and closed the door. He sat up and put his hand to his head to try and clear his mind. 'I am a gentleman not a monster, I shouldn't believe in revenge and non-sense!' Lucien figured and lowered his hand to his lap then noticed Alice walking toward him. He closed his eyes as if to be hit but peeked to noticed that Alice was trying to make him stand. His emotions and anger were lowering, nothing was better than being comforted by Alice. He looked down at Alice and chuckled but didn't move. His attention was caught by a door opening. He looked over at one of the boy's doors and noticed Ryan stumble out of his room sleepily. Lucien's hand tightened around Alice's and his anger started to blaze inside of him again. 'Calm down!' Lucien scream at himself in his head. He tried to listen to Ryan's words the best he could at that moment. Once Ryan was done joking about Alice sneaking Lucien in, he rose his index finger in front of his face. "HEY! It's not what it looks like!" Lucien barked, figuring that Ryan saw it that Alice and Lucien were... "having fun." Lucien was angered but didn't know why, maybe because he thought that Ryan was making assumptions as well. Lucien stood up and pulled Alice up with him, he positioned her so she was locked in her arms and couldn't get away even if she tried. He smirked and then took a threatening step toward Ryan while spreading his wings out to show that he wasn't messing around. His wings hit the walls and couldn't spread all the way out. Lucien took another heavy step toward Ryan as if to say "Run!" but before Ryan could (if he got the message), Lucien tossed Alice into Ryan's arms and tucked his wings back behind him. A laugh left his lips. "You shoulda seen your face! You thought I was evil!!" Lucien bellowed, hands on his stomach and almost crying with laughter. He kept himself quiet but the look on Ryan's face must have been priceless.
Words ~ 429 Muse ~ Good ^_^ Comment ~ Eh, sorry it took so long ><' stupid homework and s**t making my life a living Hell.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Jan 15, 2010 12:49:53 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice was a little surprised when Lucien took her into his arms; however the joy of it soon over came her surprise. He was so warm, she could feel it from beneath his shirt. Ryan seemed a little confused too; he cocked his head to the side as Lucien took a heavy step towards him. "What are you doing?" he asked, not sure. Lucien's wings spread and he became even more confused. Alice however was not; Lucien was playing around with Ryan. She approved; they were good friends after all. Why not play pranks on each other? So she did her best to look confused as well. When Lucien took his next heavy step, Ryan wasn't sure what to expect. He didn't think Lucien would attack him (they were friends!) but he wasn't sure what was going to happen. "Lucien?" he asked, wondering if the demon had come out. Suddenly Alice felt herself propelled forward and she landed in Ryan's arms. The look of surprise on Ryan's face was priceless; so was Alice's. Lucien laughed, ranting about how funny Ryan's face must've been. Ryan didn't think it was very funny but let Lucien laugh anyway. Suddenly the door next to him opened and Zak poke his sleepy head out. His hair was in front of his eyes and he brushed it away and blinked sleepily at Lucien. "Is that-?" he started then just shook his head, "I didn't see anyone." He went back in his room. "Well I did." Ralph came up behind Ryan, grinning at Alice, "Oooo. Wait 'til dad finds out." Alice glared at him until he itched nervously, "If you say one word...." "He won't," Ryan said, "If he knows whats good for him." "More blackmail?" Alice asked and Ryan just grinned. "Hey, while we're up, might as well go out for a little. Lucien you coming?"[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Jan 15, 2010 18:41:23 GMT -5
Lucien wiped away the few tears that had gathered around his sore eyes from crying and lack of sleep. He glanced over at Zak's door, his smile quickly fading to a glare. When Zak shook his head and agreed not to say anything, Lucien smiled, maybe they weren't so bad as he had assumed. He had learned his lesson, assuming was bad. But not even a minute later, Ralph was standing in his doorway. Lucien's chest tightened at the words that were spoken but smiled when he heard Alice and Ryan's response to their brother's threat to tell. He was quickly caught off guard when Ryan asked for them to go on a walk. "You understand that it's about the middle of the night out right now, yes?" Lucien asked, staring at Ryan as if he had a large bug on his face. "Um, well I don't wish to offend your traditions and I would be very grateful to learn what you and your family has been up to since I've been gone." Lucien said with a nod and walked into Alice's room to get his jacket, a few seconds later, Lucien appeared in Alice's doorway and looked at the staircase that led downstairs. He glanced over to the right to see if Alice and Ryan were still then then headed down the stairs. Dim moonlight shone through the windows and he tightened his arm warmers since they had grown loose. He walked to the front door and opened the single door and slipped his hands into his pockets. He suddenly heard the echo voice again. Lucien turned and looked at the door then looked forward again. "Come on... Come on..." the voice continued over and over in his head. He didn't show any fear or shock though he found out who was talking to him. "Come on... kill them all... they all hurt you in some way... don't pretend to be brave..." the voice went on even though Lucien tried his best to ignore it.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Jan 19, 2010 12:27:54 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice followed Lucien to her room, grabbing her pink sweater with the red hearts on it. She buttoned it up and walked downstairs after him. She skipped happily as she went and followed Lucien out the door. Her eyes swept outside, not seeing Ryan. Where was he? She looked up and Ryan was hanging upside down from a branch near the top of the house, smiling widely. "Get down from there!" she whispered, "Before you fall and break your neck!" Ryan rolled his eyes, "Who are you? Mom?" But came down all the same, jumping and taking the impact on his legs. "So we can go down to the lake or go window shopping in town. If we're lucky, someone forgot to close one of the shops." He took his tiger form and ran for the dense bush. "I guess we should follow huh?" Alice asked and got nervous. Very carefully, she slipped her hand into Lucien's then looked up to see his reaction. She wasn't sure what to expect.
Jackal had heard laughing, he knew he had. There was no way he was mistaken. He carefully got out of bed, not waking Kally and walked out of the room. Alice's door was wide open, he looked in. She wasn't in there. The next room she went to was Ryan's; he wasn't there as well. He groaned in frustration; again with the night walks. He'd have to tie Ryan down to his bed from now on. Jackal walked back down the hall and opened Zak's door, "ZAK! WHERE DID RYAN AND ALICE GO!? THEY HAD BETTER NOT HAVE RAN OFF TO FIND THAT ANGEL BOY!" Zak stirred and looked up, tired and confused. "Where's who?" "Don't give me that crap! You heard me perfectly!" Zak yawned, shaking his head, "No idea." Jackal ground his teeth, "Your younger brother and sister." Zak shrugged, and lay his head back down. Jackal wasn't an idiot, Zak slept through nothing. He knew something and he wasn't telling him. But Jackal left the room and went downstairs to grab his coat, he'd find them himself.[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Jan 23, 2010 15:21:12 GMT -5
Lucien was still trying to ignore the voice that urged him when he was startled by something touching his hand. The voice silenced itself and Lucien looked down to notice Alice holding his hand and looking at him. He smiled back the best he could and watched as Ryan ran off in his tiger form. He failed to notice that when he jumped from Alice touching his hand, the loose feathers from his tucked wings gave away and floated to the ground.
Meanwhile, in town, the street lights shone brightly but no one was around so he spread his wings out slightly so they looked and felt relaxed. He followed the cat's footprints while still holding Alice's hand. "So... what did your brother mean by, If we're lucky, someone forgot to close a shop? Is he planning to steal something? If so, leave me out of it!" Lucien said stomping his foot lightly to make his point get across though he would do just about anything for Alice. After a long while, Lucien was still following the light prints in the dirt road. He glanced at Alice and sighed while shaking his head. "Why does your father hate me so? I KNOW! I know, because of what my demon made me do in the past and the miscommunication but... I didn't kill you! You're still alive and so he should be grateful that I choice to play with you back then instead of torture you..." Lucien sighed, he felt like crying, he wanted to re-do his whole life. His mind went clear and he watched Alice, hoping for an answer. "What can I do to make him like me more?" Lucien asked after a long silence filled the air between them. Lucien noticed that they were no longer walking on the dirt path, they were now on a stone road. Lucien spotted a shop with a door wide open and walked toward the building, still listening.
Words ~ 332 Muse ~ Eh... Comment ~ Some of Lucien's feathers are on their front porch and I said "after a long silence" so either Alice could have replied then everything was quiet or she just didn't reply. I also put "still listening" which mean that Alice could be talking or Lucien is waiting for her to talk. You can power play if you want, you know, to make it more interesting and so my muse can go up ^^'
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