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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 10, 2009 12:34:55 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice walked, her bag swung over her shoulder as she did every day when she went to and from school. Her face was cheery and bright, the sunlight reflecting off her peach-like skin. She couldn't help but skip a little, portraying how happy she was. After weeks of talking with her father (and arguing and crying), he'd finally let her go to an actual public school instead of being home-schooled. And ever since she'd been very happy; though it had been hard at first. Most of the things they taught there were confusing to her and she had been made fun of more than once but she got use to it. Alice guessed that it was just part of life. She hadn't made any friends yet but she hoped soon. For now she'd just keep to herself and make sure her brothers and especially her father not find out about the hard times. She knew better than to get them involved. Her thoughts turned to the silver whistle she wore around her neck, the one Lucien had gave her before she had to leave him. Her hand closed around it protectively and she stopped, wondering how he was and where he was. She imagined him some place sunny and warm from time to time. The wind caught her hair and blew it gently. Her hand dropped and she brushed it from her eyes, shaking her head. She needed to get home before everyone worried about her. She began again to walk then a feeling came to her. It wasn't hers, this one was of a sudden joy. She always felt joyful, or tried to. Alice turned, seeing a figure in the distance. The face of this person was shadowed out but she was certain it was male. Probably some boy trying to follow me home again, she thought, and remembered the last time it happened. Ryan had scared that guy silly in his tiger form. However funny it was, she didn't need a repeat of it. She turned, facing the person, "Who are you and why are you following me?"
This is not good, Zak thought, watching his father and Ryan his little brother, stare intensly at each other. They were all sitting in the living room; his father on one end of the room and Ryan on the other. Both looked ready to kill the other, daring the other to move a step. Ralph lay back on the couch, care-free of the chaos that was about to unfold. Zak had expected Alice to be home by now and that Ryan and their father would be cooing over her. That was the only thing they seemed to agree on; when Alice was gone the claws were out and each would like nothing more than killing the other. Ryan's foot tapped impatiently, breaking his gaze and looking out the window. Where is Alice?, he thought. How he hated being stuck in the house, especially with him. He was making a effort not to try and rip his father's throat out, for Alice's sake. Still, it was very tempting; Ryan sighed, looking over to his brothers. His eyes met Zak's and he grunted; how he wanted to badly get out of here. God Alice, hurry![/glow]
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Post by morgen on Nov 10, 2009 21:06:41 GMT -5
Lucien had just been in town, seeing what had changed from when he left a few years back. He was resting, sitting under an acorn tree and kept grabbing the small nuts, tossing them in the air, them shooting a small stream of fire from his hand, to burn the acorn. He did a handful of them or so when he heard a loud ringing. He turned quickly to notice teens walking out of the building and walking to a large, orange car. Lucien rolled his eyes and sighed. School, buses, friends, things he never had but that didn't bug him. He heard something familiar, almost like a bell but not quite. He looked over at the kids who walked out of the doors and didn't move, frozen like a statue. After the large group of kids had passed and gotten onto their buses, some more kids came out. Lucien quickly understood. Those kids walked home, they had to wait to walk out so the buses wouldn't hit them. He watched each of them, hearing the friendly bell chime very softly. He suddenly noticed something. A girl who he had seen before. He stood up to see her better. He noticed her hand cupped around something that was near her chest. The whistle! The whistle was dinging very quietly as she walked and it hit her hand and chest. Lucien stared at her and watched as she stayed at the very back of the group of kids. Lucien still wasn't sure if he should just walk up to her or stay where he was so he decided to do both. He walked in the shadow of the trees and followed her. He tried to think about what to do. If he kept following her, she may notice and attack or her brothers may show up. His shimmering eyes widened at the thought of their last meeting. A sudden voice, a question, caught him off guard. He immediately stopped walking and stared at her. "Who are you and why are you following me?" the girl asked in a more mature tone then when they met last. Lucien opened his mouth to speak but nothing came out. He tried to raise his wings but they ached at the thought of showing his wings in slight public. He forced one foot forward then stopped. 'What to do... what to do...' Lucien wondered, holding back any and all temptations that his demon was trying to push upon him. "Well you see-" Lucien started, his deep voice cracking in worry and fear. 'What if she never wanted to seem me again. Don't be stupid Luce, then why would she be wearing your whistle?' Lucien contemplated, walking forward automatically. He grabbed her hands and pulled them about from her chest and whistle. He glanced down and noticed that it WAS his whistle. It WAS Alice! He quickly noticed what he had done and took a step back. She hadn't seen him for years and he sounded, acted, and looked different. What would her reaction be? Pervert? Who are you? Another stalker boy? Lucien took another step back and sorrow filled his eyes. His wings tight against his body, hidden in his shirt. "Sorry" his voice squealed, flinching, as if ready to be hit or attacked.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 11, 2009 12:26:39 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] She didn't recognize the man that followed her as he stepped forward and she saw his face. Not from school or anywhere at all. He was a stranger; his feelings consisted of worry and fear. But why did he feel this way? Was it because she had found him before he could do anything? Or was it something innoccent? He stepped another step forward and she was slightly scared herself, yet she couldn't call out for help. Her throat felt closed up and she swallowed; her only compensation was that the guy seemed as nervous as she did. "Who are you?" she asked again, trying to sound brave but failing miserably. The man walked up to her and grabbed her hands pulling them away from her chest. She closed her eyes frightened but he didn't do anything to her. And seconds later he let her go; her breath was ragged and heavy with fear. Who is this boy, she thought, backing away slightly. Was he just some pervert or some boy following her from school? No, something told her it went deeper. She was surprized by his apology and blinked in disbelief when she caught it. The sadness, the sadness in his eyes. She remembered it so well, she'd seen it every night in her dreams and wished to make it go away. To replace it with happiness. "Lucien?" she asked, not believing what her eyes were seeing. But it was him. He looked different, older and his voice was slightly different from what she remembered. Still she smiled when she saw him and glomped him all the same. "Oh Lucien!" she exclaimed, "Oh it's really really you! I missed you so much!" She realized she was squeezing him and let go, holding some self-control, "Where have you been? Have you been okay? Are you eating right?" She was so worried about him that the words rushed from her mouth and she stopped when he put his finger to her lips. "Yeah, sorry" she apologized, giving him a guilty grin. [/glow] Sorry that I had to power play Lucien a little.... *hits self* I ish a bad roleplayer! But anyway, yay! Theyz back together!!!^^
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Post by morgen on Nov 11, 2009 22:33:00 GMT -5
Lucien's mouth broke into a smile as soon as she asked his named. "Tis I" Lucien chuckled with and slightly bow. He felt tightness wrap around his body and looked down to see Alice hugging him tightly. Only when he tried to laugh in joy did he notice how hard she was hugging him. Almost as soon as he was going to tell her to calm down, she let go of him and bombarded him with questions. He looked up, as if thinking about each question but they kept coming. He looked back down at her and place his index finger of his left hand in front of her lip. "Shhh" Lucien whispered, followed by her apology. He lowered his hand back down to his side and looked back up at the dim sky. "Umm, to answer your questions, or, the ones I could understand: Where have I been?" he started, shrugging then turning to look around the woods they were in. "Just traveling and seeing how my friends have been doing. Have I been okay? Quite. Am I eating ok? Better than before!" Lucien chuckled, rubbing her head like he had done before, when they were together. Meanwhile, Sarah darted toward the brother's house. Her hooves clomping against the cement. She skid to a stop by rising her front hooves off the ground. She turned and slowly and carefully walked up the steps. She reached out and clicked on the doorbell. Once the door opened, she pulled her longer hair out of her face and studied the familiar face. "Ryan?" She asked, unsure. She shook her head. "I don't care which brother! Alice is in trouble!! Lucien ran off a few years back and has just returned! I heard from my tribe that he was heading toward the school and has been spotted following her!" she cried out, turning and darting off quickly. "I will keep a look out!" Sarah called out behind her. She knew that one, if not all, brothers would go to find Alice but she was saying that she would keep an eye out for any updates. Back to Lucien and Alice, Lucien was now sitting on his feet-on his knees-and showing Alice how he could make fire into creatures. He put his hands together as if to pray but the slowly pulled his hands apart and a fire bird fly toward the sun. A small POOF noise was heard and small embers fell, not enough to burn anyone.
Words ~ 419 Muse ~ Good Comment ~ No problem, I powerplayed a bit too. Also, Sarah isn't one for conversation if you haven't noticed so I don't plan for her to be in the middle of the family and Lucien but she will come between them if she must for they ARE in her land! XD
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 12, 2009 12:48:29 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice was so happy to have Lucien back with her; she'd missed him so much. And better yet, he'd been well and been taking care of himself. She looked at him with loving eyes, remembering the short time they had together. He answered her questions and she hugged him again, his hand rubbing the top of her head as it always did. She rubbed her cheek to his chest and sighed; a strange emotion filled her. She looked up at Lucien and her face heated. How she missed him so. How she wanted to be like this forever, to hug him and never, ever let go. Oh how she loved him.
Ryan heard the doorbell rang but he was beaten to the door by his father.d**n bastard he thought, going back to the living room. "Ryan?" Sarah's voice rang in his ears as she addressed his father. Jackal didn't show emotion to it, he was use to it. As much as Ryan hated to admit it, he was the only one that looked like the man almost exactly. Her brief explanation though sent him in a rage. His eyes darkened over to what he remembered Alice had told him. About the boy named Lucien who had dared hurt his little girl. And now he was most likely trying again. He would not allow it. He stalked quietly to the living room; his sons stood watching him. "Find her," he said, his voice cold, "Now." Without a word, Zak and Ralph left, both in wolf form to find the youngest Momori. Ryan however stayed behind, watching his father who stared at him intensely. "I expected you to be the first out the door." Jackal said. "Right back 'attcha." Ryan said. Jackal smiled, a sort of cocky one that was not unlike his youngest sons, "I didn't say I wasn't going too." Ryan snorted, and transformed tiger, walking out the door. He got across the yard and then looked back. A lion padded out the door, jumping down the steps and yawned. The mane was white with brown and black mixed in. Jackal-the lion- sprinted into the forest, his son not far behind.
Alice clapped her hands together, mesmerized by the small fire bird that flew out of Lucien's hands. It popped and burst into small embers, the embers fell on her and she jumped into Lucien's arms. Fire scared her, it had since she'd been burned by Lucien. Yes she forgave him but it still didn't take away the pain of the burn and the fear she had of him when it happened. Now however she knew he would never hurt her. He was as harmful as a butterfly. Alice smiled and cuddled in his arms; the emotion came back as she looked into his eyes. His beautiful eyes that looked as if he were about to cry with joy. Her hand tightened to a fist and she rose up, brushing her lips to his cheek in a affectionate way, showing how much she loved him and how it would break her if he left. A roar called through the forest and she froze; her father was coming for her. And Lucien was here...... "Oh no," she said, "Oh no oh no oh no oh no......"[/glow] ....seems like nothing gets past Jackal. I'd hate to think of what might happen to Lucien if he catches him....O.0 And I made it seem like Alice like automatically fell for Lucien too. But anywayz, one of my very good and long posts!!!^^
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Post by morgen on Nov 12, 2009 21:06:27 GMT -5
Lucien's large hands held her tight. His arms and palms were covered in the glove that helped him control the fire. His gloves and hands were warm, not hot, as he held Alice tightly when she was in his lap. He stared up at the embers that shone like stars. He say her looking at him out of the corner of his eyes and glanced down at her. As soon as he looked down, she rose. He chuckled at her and rubbed the back of his head. "I miss the old-" he started but quickly stopped himself. He didn't want her to take it the wrong way as if he missed his demon trying to kill her. A roar broke his concentration followed by Alice's voice sounding worried and scared. He rose as well and grabbed her shoulders. "What's wrong? What's going on?" Lucien asked in a calm voice with a hit of fear in it. He heard something and quickly turned to a small opening in the trees on the other side of the dirt path. He glared into the darkness and pulled Alice closer to him. A ripped sounded through the forest. The back of his shirt tore as his large, soft, black wings shoot through, curling around Alice and him slightly, ready to close if he had to. His wings had grown a few inches since the last time they saw each other. "Hello?" Lucien asked in a still voice, still protective. After a second of waiting. His wings slowly tucked behind him again. He turned toward Alice and chuckled. "See, it was nothing" he said, turning his back to the path and grabbing under her chin and kissing her forehead. "I've missed you" Lucien mumbled, turning his head slightly to face back to the trees across from the road. His face showed confusion, as if thinking of something to do or say, then he smiled slightly. "Montrez-vous, show yourself" Lucien said, first in French then in English, thinking that he said it right. He shrugged slightly then looked back at Alice's pale face. His smile faded quickly.
Words ~ 359 Muse ~ Normal Comment ~ Oy! I was so tempted to power-play but I want to see who is appearing, Ryan, the father *squeals* Poor Lucien, he always gets beat up. Lol, GO ACTION! It always makes posts fun that way ^_^
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 12, 2009 21:18:45 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] As soon as Lucien turned his back, Jackal attacked from the side, plowing him down like a steam roller. He did this so as not to hurt Alice but to effectively hurt the boy who dared to lay his hands on his daughter, his baby. He roared in triumph and returned to his normal form, looking to his daughter with a stern look. He didn't normally do this but he thought it right at a time like this. Her eyes looked back into his and she knelt down by Lucien. "Don't touch him." he ordered and she looked at him but didn't touch. "Daddy, please," she begged, "He wasn't trying to hurt me. Lucien is kind and gentle; yes he hurt me once but he took care of me like you do." His gaze was still hard and cold. "Please daddy, don't hurt him." she pleaded. "Go home Alice," Jackal said, pulling out his sword and walking towards the boy sprawled out on the ground. Alice's eyes swam with tears and she stepped in front of her father. "Please..." she tried one last time, "I'll do anything." "Home. Now." was the end of it and she bowed her head and began to walk away. However she stopped in the forest, hiding behind a tree watching her father. He wasn't one for violence most of the time but when it came to protecting his offspring he did what he had to. He pushed Lucien with the toe of his boot, "Get up boy." Then he smiled, "I didn't hurt you that much so get up."[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Nov 15, 2009 13:28:26 GMT -5
Lucien felt something sharp hit him on his left arm and skinned a part of his wing. The cut hurt but the force was what pushed him down. He fell over and ground his teeth, his eyes shut tight. Not only was it a fully grown animal but it was a human putting force behind it as well. Blood quickly flowed from his arm. He quickly grabbed his left arm and managed to open his eyes and look over at him wing, which, luckily, wasn't bleeding.He glanced over at Alice and the father and figured that he must have missed something because Alice was walking away. Without thinking, he reached out toward Alice with his left hand and quickly drew it back with a whimper of pain. The man's voice echoed his his head while feeling his foot tap against his arm. "Get up boy. I didn't hurt you that much so get up." Lucien was so tempted to rip his foot off but decided it would be better not to. He slapped the mans foot away with his bloody right hand and stood up. "You aren't like other people. You're filled with hate and confusion. You put pure anger and power behind your hits... which I guess is a good thing if you really want to hurt the person." Lucien said, first glaring at the man then simply chuckling with his second statement. He saw the man's expression change. Wither it was to anger or something else, Lucien saw another hit coming toward him. He quickly ducked and slide his foot on the ground, under the man's feet. With a chuckled, he glanced behind him at the man and rose, noticing the new expression on his face, this time it WAS pure anger and hate. Lucien's eyes widened and he rose his hands to his chest, palms facing the father. He started to sweat and smiled weakly. "Listen, I don't want any trouble so jus' let me go and I'll stay away from your daughter." Lucien said, trying to decided if he should say "I promise at the end" but he decided not to, he planned on seeing her again. "Hey Mister. Alice's Father, why are you showing so much anger toward me, I didn't do anything to your daughter, see, she's alright... how did you even know where she was? Oh yeah, sent... talk about a strict father, wanting her home at a certain time and tracks her if she's late, is that it?" Lucien asked, not wanting to sound rude or like a teen talking to their parents, but it came out that way. He took a step back and watched the father. "Sorry" was all that came out of him mouth.
Words ~ 470 Muse ~ Good Comment ~ I left it, when Lucien slid his foot on the ground, so that the father could have fallen or jumped away to avoid it.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 16, 2009 12:36:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Jackal watched as the boy got up, smacking his foot away and had to grin, the kid had bite. And smarts, he realized by Lucien's first statement. It wasn't all rage behind his attacks but that was what pretty much fueled them. And right now, he was fueled at the thought that his Alice was with this guy was what fueled him. As a father, it was normal for him to think that no one was good enough for his daughter. And yes, even he knew he took it too far sometimes. But he honestly thought that this time he was allowed to. Even if Alice did forgive this guy, Lucien, for burning her, Jackal had no forgiveness or tolerance for anyone who hurt her, no matter if they meant to or not. With this in mind, he used closed his hand in to a fist and took a swing. Lucien was quick on his feet; he gave him credit for that. The boy ducked then swept his foot on the ground to trip Jackal. If only Jackal didn't fight Ryan everyday, maybe he wouldn't had seen it coming. That however was not the case so he easily jumped aside, turning into an Osprey. He swooped taking a stab at Lucien's face and missing as the boy ducked again. He landed, a few feet away, facing the boy. To Lucien's plead, he noticed there was no 'I promise' but didn't really think on it long or hard. Again when Lucien talked, Jackal smirked and chuckled to himself. "I'm angry because I have reason to be. You burned my little girl," he answered, surprisingly feeling calm, "And I have no tolerance for those who hurt my children, especially my daughter. I'd fault you for what you did to Ryan too, but I suppose he needed someone to knock him down a few feet." The look of surprise on Lucien's face was priceless. "What? You didn't think I'd know? I know everything that goes on with my kids. Its my job to know. "And I'm only strict with her because I care. Something you wouldn't understand unless you had kids yourself. You want better for them, you protect them as best you can from anything that can hurt them. You care about them more than yourself; thats something you find out about yourself when you become a parent. Alice may forgive you but I don't. I don't forgive anyone who hurts my baby." Yes, he knew it sounded weird since she was sixteen, but she was still his baby. The little girl he use to hold when she cried at night. Who use to play and pull at his hair and he winced when he remembered how she spit up cream corn on his new black shirt he'd been wearing.(XDXD) He tightened his grip on his sword and stared at Lucien, "I'll make a deal with you. You can talk to my daughter all you want, but I have to be within six feet of your conversation. So I can make sure you don't hurt her again. And God help me you try something, I'll slit your throat, pull your tongue out the slit and do a Canadian knot with it."[/glow] o.0 Well, now we know where Ryan's colorful language came from....but anyway Wow!!!! This thing is long!!!^^
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Post by morgen on Nov 19, 2009 17:40:29 GMT -5
Lucien at first, looked shocked that the brothers had told their father about him and the way he acted but left out the part about his demon taking over. Lucien bit his lower lip and faced the man completely. The man showed amusement, only laughing at his face, not what he was thinking. "You're missing out a large chuck mister" Lucien mumbled but was obviously unheard because the man kept rambling. Lucien simply rolled his eyes and crossed his arms, looking around, everywhere but at the man. "Mhm, keep talking big daddy" Lucien spat, looking back at the man, noticing his grip on the sword what tighter. Lucien uncrossed his arms and took a step back, showing that he didn't want to fight. "I'll make a deal with you. You can talk to my daughter all you want, but I have to be within six feet of your conversation. So I can make sure you don't hurt her again. And God help me..." Lucien lost all interest after that. "Indeed. God help you and me both. You, old man, so you don't die before you age another year and me, to allow me into the Heaven where I was born for" Lucien said, shrugging slightly and sounding like a lawyer. "Fine, whatever you want sir. You're to childish to understand me so I guess I will play your game as well" Lucien said, clearing his throat. "Why is it that Alice and your sons never spoke about you? Why is it that you didn't come to their rescue when "I was beatin them up?" Why is it that just now, you care for her when she cares about me more?" Lucien asked, taking another step back at the sight of on coming trouble.
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 20, 2009 12:45:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Jackal knew he should feel furious now but he couldn't help but smile and choke down a laugh. Half of it had to do with Alice still being near by. The other half was Lucien. The kid definitely had bite; he reminded him of Ryan. Very much like his second youngest child in fact. Both had a fire that refused to be put out by anyone. "Ryan didn't have to tell me what happened," Jackal told Lucien, loosening his grip, "I picked up a pretty good idea of what happened. Alice told me about what had happened, and about you." He cocked his head slightly, scanning the boy with his eyes. "Sorry if I seem mean and protective; she's my daughter. My only daughter and I don't want anything to happen to her. They say you don't know what you have 'til its gone; I'm just trying not to loose her before its too late." Lucien's small and rude comments didn't bother Jackal in the least; he got the same from Ryan. He'd learned to ignore it or, his favorite method, taking the words apart and redirecting the sentence. However he felt surprised that Alice had never mentioned him. As far as he knew, she was always saying how nice and kind her father was. To the next question, Jackal shrugged, "I wasn't in the area at the time. I was off doing something and my wife was home. By the time I came back, she was in sobbing hysterics over Ryan and the fact that her 'little girl' was gone." He hoped Lucien felt some sort of regret for taking Alice away from her home; he knew he had been irritant and cranky the week she wasn't home. He'd yelled at his sons a lot during that time. The last question irritated Jackal a lot. "What do you mean she cares for you more than me?" he said, narrowing his eyes, "And how could you be so bold to make that statement?"
There was a growing irritation in her father's voice; she could feel it. He hated to think that she cared for anyone over him. She hated to think that too...but she did. She cared for Lucien. She cared so much and she wasn't so sure it was because of what she saw in his eyes anymore. Even though she knew she shouldn't, she stepped out from behind the tree and crossed over to the two. From her father's expression, she knew he knew she had been there a while. It was obvious Lucien did not. "Dad," she started, "I-I know that you'd never forgive him even though I did. And I know that your only looking out for my best interests and I'm grateful. But I'm sixteen now, I'm not seven. I can take care of myself. "And I need you to trust my decisions."-she crossed over to Lucien and put her arm around him-"Lucien is a good guy; he's kind and trustworthy. You'd like him if you just gave him that chance." Jackal looked from him to her and shrugged, sort of defeated, "Eh, go ahead. But that doesn't mean I like it." She smiled and kissed his cheek, "You will. I do have to grow up sometime." He rolled his eyes and was lion once again, "I'd better go tell your brothers I found you." And with that he was went off. Alice turned to Lucien again, a little embarrassed. "Lucien, do you care for me too?" she asked, looking into his eyes.[/glow] Yay, I did a long post. I'm not sure if this is how the story should turn or if you wanted them to actually fight or not. But I did want to add some sort of romance into it. Poor Jackal, he's kind of heart broken to let his little girl grow up. XD *imagines Jackal still treating Alice like she was seven when shes twenty* But anyway, now they're alone. A-L-O-N-E. All by themselves. With no adult supervision.....*gasp* I've gotta make a character post for Alice's mother *groan* Too many family members!! DX
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Post by morgen on Nov 20, 2009 17:40:07 GMT -5
Lucien stared at the man who showed irritation. He was about to open his mouth and say "you're only mad cus you know it's true" but Alice came between them and started to speak. Lucien didn't notice that his hands were as tight fists, his nails digging into his palm until the older man turned into a lion and left. He couldn't un-clench his fists for some reason. No, there were reasons. He was mad because the father made it sound as though he knew Lucien inside and out. Not only that, but... the wind blew a strange but familiar smell. His face didn't show anger. He face was straight and he stared at the small forest area where the lion disappeared into. Lucien wasn't really even listening to Alice but when he heard her ask if he cared. He let his hands relax, his nails slowly coming out of his palm. Sticky and bloody. He looked down and Alice, still with no smile but he managed to crack a small smile, fake, but visible. It was obvious that he was holding something back, almost as if fighting pain. His smile quickly faded. "Alice? I care for you. That's why I need you to tell your brothers, not your father... not that I told you, that "the winds have changed" ok? Can you tell them that?" Lucien asked, a few drops of sweat dripping off his forehead and chin. Suddenly, out of no where, Lucien gagged and his eyes got large. He gasped for breath and his head turned to look behind him. He noticed Sarah standing behind him. "Sorry Lucien... safety reasons" Sarah said, lowered her front hooves to the ground. Lucien looked back at Alice then his eyes rolled to the back of his head and he fell over, laying on his stomach. Sarah looked at the back of his head, at the small amount of blood them left it. "Come now Alice. I managed to hit him in the back of the head but- Alice? Are you ok?" Sarah said, looking at Alice's extinguished face.
Words ~ 357 Muse ~ Normal Comment ~ So it was left where it could end or carry on, like, "a few hours later" blah blah blah. Lol, sorry that it's a weak post, all nervous about the musical in a half an hour!
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 23, 2009 12:44:32 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Alice smiled when he said he cared about her too. She felt all warm inside from his words. Though his next words confused her. The winds have changed? she thought, what did that mean? Before she could ask however, Sarah gave Lucien a kick in the head with her front hooves. Alice watched as Lucien fell knocked out. She was too surprised to cry. "W-what just happened?" she asked when Sarah asked if she was alright. Her confusion quickly turned to anger, "What did you do to him?!" She looked accusingly at Sarah and tears formed in her eyes as she knelt down, taking Lucien's head in her lap. Her hand felt something wet and she lifted it to see that it was his blood. She cuddled his head in her arms and cried. He wasn't dead, she was grateful for that. "The winds have changed, huh?" she whispered to herself, wondering what it meant. She stood, picking up Lucien as best she could. She swung her arm around her shoulder and hoisted him to his feet. The wound in his head worried her, she had to get him home. Her mother would know what to do. And her brothers would understand his words.
Ryan slunk through the bushes, his hazel eyes watching for his brothers or Alice. He had lost his father a while back not that he cared much. He kept going, somehow finding her. She was lifting someone off the ground. Was that Lucien? Ryan walked up, changing to normal and grabbed Alice; sliding Lucien off of her. She seemed not too happy, "Ryan?! What are you doing?! Lucien needs help! He's hurt!" Ryan didn't hear her; he was too happy. He didn't let go until she poked him in his stomach rather hard. "We have to help Lucien!" she pleaded. She knew Ryan would understand. He and Lucien were friends right? He nodded, picking Lucien up himself. "Hey Sarah," he asked, "Whats so dangerous about Lucien anyway?"[/glow]
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Post by morgen on Nov 23, 2009 17:21:33 GMT -5
Lucien felt someone and heard mumbling but couldn't move. He continued to hear a tired, rough voice, keep telling him to stop fighting the demon. He didn't listen to the voice, he tried to make out what the other voices were, the ones that weren't his demon's. Sarah stared at Alice and every time she would reach out to Lucien, she drew back because of Alice. It seemed as though Alice didn't trust her any more. Sarah heard something and quickly turned toward the trees to notice a flash then Ryan. He must have just transformed back to himself, Sarah figured. Ryan helped Lucien and Sarah took a few steps back. This was bad. The question caught her off guard. "What do you mean, what's so bad about him?" Sarah gasped in shock. She was shaking her head. "He left everyone a few years back to try and tame him power but when he couldn't, he went to the Netherworld and made a sort of deal with the underworld lord. They would teach him how to control the demon as long as he worked for them when the war came. He don't thing of ANYONE as his friend anymore! He thinks that they get in the way... or... so my herd said. This is what the guards have noticed" Sarah explained, following Ryan and Alice. Her eyes wandered to Lucien who's eyes were shut tightly. Lucien heard what was going on but couldn't do anything. His head throbbed and all he saw was darkness. His eyes weren't open but in the darkness, he was a darker figured walking toward him. What was that? It looked like a dog with bat wings. Maybe it was a lizard. No, it was his demon, grinning at him, walking toward him. Lucien's arms, which were wrapped around Ryan's neck, clawed at his chest. Lucien's head, that was resting on his shoulder, seemed to growl. All Lucien could "see" was his demon fighting him and him being unable to move and fight back. Another strange smell blew in the wind and he moaned. In him mind and physically. Sarah stopped walking and she rose to her back hooves. "LET GO OF HIM RYAN! RUN! I'LL TAKE CARE OF HIM!" Sarah said, ignoring the sound she heard.
Word ~ 396 Muse ~ Good Comment ~ Maybe the father could come back, or one of the brothers, whichever one has more of a grudge on Lucien. *grins, plotting* maybe Alice or Ryan turns evil with him in order to try and get the real Lucien out!
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Post by Hachiubi!!!^^ on Nov 24, 2009 12:30:20 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] Ryan and Alice listened to Sarah's explanation to his question. It seemed to make sense; Lucien's long absence. His reappearance, the feeling of dread that Ryan use to feel when he was near was gone. Still Ryan couldn't believe that Lucien was bad. "Have you ever thought Sarah?" Ryan started, turning around, "That maybe Lucien made that deal to protect the ones he cares about?" He looked at Alice who seemed to be thinking the same thing. No way in hell (pardon the pun) would Lucien make that sort of deal unless it was going to benefit his friends...or Alice. Ryan was sure he'd made the deal so he wouldn't hurt Alice again. "And if Alice was a hindrance to him, why would he come back to see her?" he asked again, feeling confident in his view of Lucien. He knew the guy, or knew him well enough to be positive about him. If they were just getting in his way, why didn't he immediately kill Alice or them? Lucien's moving caught Ryan's attention and he turned his head. His claws scratched at Ryan's shirt ripping it. "Aw god, not again!" Ryan shouted, "You are so lucky your my friend!" There was a moan and Sarah went nuts. "LET GO OF HIM RYAN! RUN! I'LL TAKE CARE OF HIM!" Ryan, out of habit, dropped Lucien and transformed tiger, standing in front of Alice. Lucien's form turned from regular to demon. Alice was scared and frozen in place. "Lucien?" she asked, finding the strength to take a step forward. Out of the bushes, Ralph emerged, rushing the dog with the bat wings. Zak came from the other side, doing the same; forcing it back and away. "So you guys finally show up." Ryan snorted, shedding his tiger form and taking his wolf form which was white. Zak pushed Alice away, herding her away from the fight. The demon seemed to want to follow but Ralph and Ryan steered it in the other direction, snarling and snapping.[/glow] I power-played Lucien a bit. And I think I left it open. Lucien could be defeated, he could get away and try to follow Zak and Alice.......and I can't think of anymore. Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving!!!^^
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